[GPP] Feedback

Disclaimer: This only serves as constructive feedback, not an attempt to embarrass or put down anyone's effort.

Steve Irwin: Conservation effort & environmentalism

+ Clear rationale for doing the project
+ Prior research done
Eg. Previously, only campaigns on awareness is done
+ Unique activity
Eg. Pet exchange program
- Target group is not clear
- Specific steps of carrying out the plan
- Timeline

J.K. Rowling: Tackling depression

- Aims and plan needs to gel
- Target group needs to be clear.
- Eg. Survey on who? Will depressed people tell you their conditions? Such patients usually don’t know they suffer from depression and even if they do, they will not admit it.
- Why J.K Rowling?
Need to be clear about rationale.
- Do prior research.
- Activity needs to meet the aims
Eg. Maze: Know about J.K Rowling OR depression?
Choose one to be more focused.
Decision making is different from tackling depression
- Talk by a psychologist & motivational speaker
Not unique.
- Steps to carry out plan are not specific or well thought-out.
-Possible venue? Timeline?

Terry Fox
- Plan is still very flimsy. No concrete steps given.
- How many participants do you expect?
- Fund raising: What specific non-profit organisation?
- Why not for the disabled students' expenditure?